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Marble white they came hard and fast,
tearing through like an iconoclast,
my cherished thoughts ripped asunder,
all to the sound of pealing thunder.
What is the nature of evil?  A stain on the soul, something that comes by what is good and turns it unclean?  Or is evil merely a way, a natural path?

As we walk forward and wonder, you feel in the the back of your head the scratching madness, the desire to leap upon someone bodily bearing them to the ground, hands wrapped around their throat.

Or maybe the prolonged desire to plot, to savor hate and misery like a fine wine, so immersed in our own anguish we begin to crave the darkness and deny the light, to tear out the "soul", and return to night.
Withered waltz, forgotten pains,
scars that match, the bloody stains,
sorrow savored, madness grown,
what a flavor, that I've known,
copper taste and iron plain,
know naught what I say again.
Alright things you should probably be interested in if you want to do this: Horror, Fantasy, Paranoia, Insanity and those old school multiple forms of either heroes or villains and/or character progression ideas.

I have a basic idea of a character as well as what I'd want to eventually become based on story arc.  Possibly more characters depending on your interest.  I'd also be interested for story input if the whole thing tickles your fancy.  I just want to do something creative in my life for once in the longest time.

Message me show me some examples of your art and I'll show you some examples of my writing pieces and character profiles.  If it clicks we'll go from there.
Consider a "religion" based on man, its sanctity and responsibilities in the universe and and a rational guide post to both how to learn, how to be human and how we may achieve focus, community and greater forging of the will, spirit and direction of our species.

But then again I envision a Monastic setting where people go to shut out the world for a time, to focus and learn and self improve, like a combination of western and eastern monasticism with all the fluff thrown away so there is only Mankind, the world, the cosmos and our place within.  Now imagine those people now capable of going out and articulating those thoughts unto their fellow man and spreading the glory of who we are as a creature as well as our perceived destiny of exploring the cosmos.  Many people believe our technology is outpacing our humanity.  I aim to fix that and have our humanity outstrip our technology.


United States
Well I love metal, the smell of it I mean, and gunpowder. I'm a self styled pirate of the modern age and am something of a very bad writer. When not spending time reading or writing, I am practicing with my cutlass and/or longsword (I'm also a M.A.R.E fanatic).

Current Residence: Hometown
Favorite genre of music: Folk Metal
Favorite style of art: Gritty fantasy
Operating System: Custom
MP3 player of choice: Sony Walkman
Shell of choice: Koopa troopa (lol, still gets me)
Wallpaper of choice: Randoms
Skin of choice: Mine, I've grown attached to it
Favorite cartoon character: My own personal ones I make in my head.
Personal Quote: Live by the motto, die by the irony.

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Rizuii Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
So sorry about the wait on your request, life kind of . . . happened ^^; I won't bore you with the details, but here it is: :OC: Angel Breaker by Rizuii
effigytormented Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015
woah, dude I completely forgot about it!  Awesome sauce!
Rizuii Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
glad you like it :hug:
effigytormented Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015
how's that life thing since you mention it.
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GhostPriest Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the watch!
effigytormented Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2015
S'aight, I like your work.
rainvine Featured By Owner Edited Nov 3, 2014   Filmographer
Might I suggest you check out a little known series called Twilight? 

I feel like the emotional depth of the protagonist, A Ms Bella Swan, would be appealing to you!
effigytormented Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014
Oh that's mean.
rainvine Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014   Filmographer
No, you got it all wrong! Twilight is awesome! :(
effigytormented Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014
Ah.  Lol.  I prefer someone of a more . . . pragmatic and calculating bent.  I literally devoured this omnibus in less than a month (then again I can literally read a Terry Pratchett novel, a bit off topic, in two or three days)….
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